cool, but....
it's a cool little tune, but the bassline/melody isn't legato enough. the staccato notes don't fit the style at all, and it sounds off. Unless that's what you were going for, i'd say only use staccato notes at the end of a phrase on an up beat.
That was actually what I was going for and lots of people have loved it.
very excellent
i don't agree with the former reviews...the drums are not off, but playing on the upbeat. If you count correctly you can see that the drums are right on.
but i do agree in the fact that the piano volume needs to be raised.
all in all a great chart...any idea where i could find sheet music for this?
It's an original composition, I guess the only way to get sheet music is me to write it down (or scan what I had written on paper, but it's awfully messy).
And who think that the drums are off didn't get the fact that is written in 7/8 :))
Thanx for review.
sounds good.
umm...im listening and reviewing...the first few scratches and percussion sound a little strange to me...like its off beat....or something...lol. but yeah its good...just like..needs a little more of a melody...and less of overpowering percussion. balance is key.
Yup, I've been working on this sort of stuff in my new stuff, I have alot of unreleased song that are amazing, I just need to organize them better so i can finish them easier, I run out of ideas too fast XD.
griff here....
ok scott...heres a tip....put some damn time into it lol! i swear if u spend some time on it every day u will get better.
Nice.
Ok, i like it. thats always good. I liked the original more for some reason tho. I think the percussion was a little more staticky, and it hindered the main melodies clarity. the melody sounds staticky...but other wise its good. lovin the entrance, ending....pretty much every thing but the drums!
yea.. I was led to make it sound more complicated... I guess that isn't always the best thing to do. :P
I think kmg did a trance remix of this, maybe you'd want to check that out if you wanted something heavier. :)
Oh lol and I did a remix of it too, lol.
In the style of house. :)
A good song.
I know im not much of a writer myself but i know good music. This song is too slow as in it doesnt get anything until the melodyish thing has been repeated several times. The synth is good tho. Once the drums come in it all lines up nicely. The only problem i have is that its a little too simple but it is good. When you get a chance look for my stuff on NGs!
Ahhh... the ever present debate between simplicity or complexity. Thanks for the compliment! I'm workin on building my music in different ways to eliminate this problem.
A really easy song.
This song is from fl studio. i can tell. U used a drum loop called i think elements, the explosions u got from sim synth folder, the kick is the basic kick they give u and a little bit from Real drum kits folder. The synth is good tho and its kinda interesting. Try making ur own drum beats by using the drum loops in a slicer channel. Right click on the drum loops and add some notes. Take a look at my stuff when u get a chance. Its good but easy and thats my only problem w/ it.
Nice.
Love the strings, the drums, its a good song! great balance in the instruments too! ooh! nice bassish thing ya got goin! very original! i like ur stuff and thanx for ur reviews!
Nice!
One of the best songs ive heard on ng. Listening and reviewing again... Ooh! nice piano! ur a real good artist w/ a lot of talent! Keep it up! Man u stuff gets better and better! Music Theory perhaps? Maybe thats what i need. Well thats all from me!
hehehehe. :D One of the best? I'm glad I rank up there. :) Thanks for the review!
Hmm. Im listening and reviewing...
I love the intro, the build up, and on top of all that, its a good track! Ur a good artist and stick to what ur doin. Keep up the good work. Ooh! Nice piano! what software u usin? tell me! But when you get the chance look at my stuff, please gimme some hints cuz im just startinish. Hmmm. Nice! it gets better and better!
Do you have msn? I could give you some tutorials if you want. I do have aim, but I prefer the other option. :P I'm using FL studio 6, btw. Thanks for the review.
Look for my music on the sight. Im always writin so ask me if you want a song.
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